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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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The surging rise of the world's
population
 is the biggest threat faced by humanity at the present time.I personally believe it is the biggest challenge ever faced by humanity.In
this
 essay,I will discuss the causes of rising of the
population
 and give my opinion.
Firstly
, a lack of knowledge about
birth
control
 leads to
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a rise
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rise
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 in the
population
.As many
people
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arepeople
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 unaware of the
birth
control
 facility,which paves the way for an increase in
population
 growth.
As a result
, the resources of a country cannot be spent inequitably manner.
For example
, developing nations like India and China have fewer facilities and knowledge about
birth
control
.
Secondly
,poor governance by the
government
 leads to a catastrophic increase in
population
.Because
government
 should monitor and regulate the
population
 of a country and should provide proper guidance to the citizens of their country.
Thus
, the
government
 cannot provide proper basic amenities to the people,which have
a myriad populations
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.
For instance
,the research conducted in India revealed that poor guidance of the
government
 paved the way for rising of the
population
.
Thirdly
,people in Asian countries desire to have a male child,which leads to an increase in the number of
birth
 of the child.According to their ,
belief
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 only men lead a family not women and
this
 belief paved way for rising of the
population
. In conclusion,the rise of the human
population
 on earth is the biggest threat ever faced by humanity.As there are many factors that contribute to increasing
population
 growth
government
 should implement stringent rules to
control
 the
population
 and if not it will lead to catastrophic disasters for humankind.
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