Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Today the amount of tourists is rapidly increasing but some people consider trips to have a negative effect on the

countries

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they travel to.

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essay disagrees with the given opinion for the following reasons.

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of all, the

tourism

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industry is a significant factor that leads to economic growth and employment. A huge influx of visitors brings a bunch of money

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both local and national budgets and provides new jobs.

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, it contributes almost 4% of total GDP, whereas one in five of all new jobs

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created in

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field.

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,

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helps

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to promote their culture and raise

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profile among others. More precisely, it gives an opportunity to show itself off and leads to

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cross-cultural

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cross- cultural

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cross-cultural

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awareness among locals and tourists. The national values and culture of European

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are prime examples. They are more widely

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spread

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spread

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all across the globe than less known areas for tourists. To conclude,

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travelling to

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has some disadvantageous aspects, the benefits

tourism

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brings to the

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are more relevant.

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, every country should know the ways of visitor attraction and try to promote

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their territories.