Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Without a doubt, travelling stays one of the most impressive ways of having

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, some people

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that having a journey might be harmful to the countries those welcome tourists, which is nonsense. The essay is going to discuss how the enjoyment taken by

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and what are the negative sides of that. The origin of the modern concept of

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was found in

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century and

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stays the best way of getting fresh impressions. It is proved by Cornell University in 2017 that spending money on new experiences makes people

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happier than

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spending money on physical objects.

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happens due to the ability

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. When an individual purchases a usable item

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they get used to

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in a short time.

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, they cannot take a periodical

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way.

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, travelling or

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sometimes have a negative impact on states who receives

travelers

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. There are several ways of making

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harm: ecological, social, etc. It is considered that the tourists always polluting the environment,

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there are some types of having

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fun, which

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not possible without harming the ecology (plane flights, ship journeys). Especially for these

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eco-

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appears.

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, nowadays some states cannot maintain their economical conditions without providing travel places.

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, UAE collects about $10 billion in one year due to

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. To sum up,

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travelling makes everybody happier and must appear. As well as the harm can be ignored in return for the

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and becoming a successful/developed country.