Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Without a doubt, travelling stays one of the most impressive ways of having
a
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pleasure
. Besides
the pleasure
, some people believes
that having a journey might be harmful to the countries those welcome tourists, which is nonsense. The essay is going to discuss how the enjoyment taken by Change the verb form
believe
tourism
and what are the negative sides of that.
The origin of the modern concept of tourism
was found in 17th
century and Change the article
the 17th
since
stays the best way of getting fresh impressions. It is proved by Cornell University in 2017 that spending money on new experiences makes people Add a missing verb
has since
more
happier than Change the word
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the
spending money on physical objects. Correct article usage
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This
happens due to the ability of
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to
adaptation
. When an individual purchases a usable item Replace the word
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such
as phone
they get used to Correct article usage
a phone
this
in a short time. Therefore
, they cannot take a periodical pleasure
through
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in
this
way.
On the other hand
, travelling or tourism
sometimes have a negative impact on states who receives travelers
. There are several ways of making Change the spelling
travellers
a
harm: ecological, social, etc. It is considered that the tourists always polluting the environment, Remove the article
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moreover
there are some types of having a
fun, which Remove the article
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are
not possible without harming the ecology (plane flights, ship journeys). Especially for these Change the verb form
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situations
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,situations
the
eco-Correct article usage
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tourism
appears. Also
, nowadays some states cannot maintain their economical conditions without providing travel places. For example
, UAE collects about $10 billion in one year due to tourism
.
To sum up, doubtless
travelling makes everybody happier and must appear. As well as the harm can be ignored in return for the Add a comma
,doubtless
pleasure
and becoming a successful/developed country.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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