In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehickes outweigh the disadvantages.

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Have you ever read about the passengers will be the exclusive users of vehicles?
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is the new horizon for cars, buses and trucks "No Driver". It would be advantageous for
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and public transport in terms of
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, in
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it is a scary thing if any fault
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the system occurs it will become
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a tragedy.
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essay
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I will discuss how disadvantages
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the advantages. As it is mentioned above, labour
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for
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such
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as Public Transport, the distribution chain for some other
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of Retail
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, Supermarkets,
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among other fields where the need of having a float of trucks and their respective drivers will
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or basically will be cero and
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to
other cost
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another cost
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like maintenance just to mention an example.
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, it will be beneficial for those
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in terms that they do not have to organise a hiring process followed by the training time that has to be
programed
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programmed

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for the
drivers
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team members. The driverless will easier any
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updates
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a click
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and
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that any delays
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not related
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a human
mistake
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, it is important to keep in mind that mechanical,
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or electronic
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will not
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from one day to another just by
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with the driverless trend.
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, it would introduce certain issues, which will be reduced to
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minimal
percentage and controlled by computers. Those vehicles will have some other basic parameters to be followed and tested to guarantee that are safe to be on the roads. But when
the
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problems
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it could become
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a tragedy. There is an example
on
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a movie, where a terrorist
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corrupted the computer system of the
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electric

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cars and all of them start to drive without
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the transit rules, crash
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each other
and put into an emergency situation
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passengers and people around. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
disadvantages
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outweight
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the advantages
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stage because there is not any guarantee
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the world that we live
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of world power could
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not be
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advances of
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era. I would
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to those
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that are promoting
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changes for the future to elaborate
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strategic plan that contemplates as
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task response
Your response addresses the question effectively by discussing both the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. However, ensure that your argumentation is balanced and well-supported. For example, the potential benefits such as reduced labor costs need more specific and credible support.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay could benefit from better paragraphing and more transitional phrases to guide the reader. Clearly separate your introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Use linking words such as 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' 'On the contrary,' and 'In conclusion' to enhance the flow of ideas.
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While you provide relevant examples and arguments, strive to incorporate more specific statistics, studies, or real-life instances to strengthen your arguments. Avoid overly hypothetical scenarios unless you specify their point.
coherence and cohesion
You have provided a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. This makes it easier for the reader to follow your argument.
task response
Your points are relevant to the topic and you've addressed both sides of the argument, which is essential for a balanced essay.
general
Good use of vocabulary and varied sentence structures. This demonstrates a good command of the English language.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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