Some people think that the individuals who make the most money are the most successful. Other believe that the most successful are those who contribute to society ,such as scientists and teachers. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Today, the public still has conflicting views about whether having a lucrative job and a substantial income has played a vital role in becoming a more  successful person or others think that contributing to schools with valuable jobs as

teachers

and

scientists

is the best, as the former.From my deep point of view, I believe that both concepts are correct for several reasons mentioned in the following paragraphs.  To commence with, citizens show respect for

teachers

or

scientists

for their invaluable

contribution

to the development of

society

, as if they have made it ideal so far. During school time,

teachers

can guide students on how to develop and achieve the right goals in their life, as well as

also

enhance their personalities and communication skills.

Hence

, children become successful and  ideal civilians who create great examples of ideals. From the point of view of

scientists

, overloaded

on

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with

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new inventions

such

as experiments and research, which prove wonderful for human life.

For instance

, Graham Bell made a more powerful invention, which is

television

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the television

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. It has made people's lives not only more convenient, but one can

also

connect with their loved ones without any geographic barriers. 

On the other hand

,

although

money-minded are seen as selfish and do not sacrifice for

society

, people have contributed a lot. In fact, they make a big

contribution

to developing employment and

also

pay taxes to the state.

Then

this

amount is utilized for

authorizes

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such

as pensioners , social funds like medical, education and other factors .

Although

this

contribution

may not be systemically clear,  their significant

contribution

is still undeniable.

Therefore

, they are the most successful , thanks to their invisible

contribution

to

society

. To conclude, whilst

teachers

and

scientists

have an ideal role in

society

, one who has lots of money can participate in

society

's development from the view of their financial budget.