Some people think that the individuals who make the most money are the most successful. Other believe that the most successful are those who contribute to society ,such as scientists and teachers. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Today, the public still has conflicting views about whether having a lucrative job and a substantial income has played a vital role in becoming a more  successful person or others think that contributing to schools with valuable jobs as

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is the best, as the former.From my deep point of view, I believe that both concepts are correct for several reasons mentioned in the following paragraphs.  To commence with, citizens show respect for

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or

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for their invaluable

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to the development of

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, as if they have made it ideal so far. During school time,

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can guide students on how to develop and achieve the right goals in their life, as well as

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enhance their personalities and communication skills.

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, children become successful and  ideal civilians who create great examples of ideals. From the point of view of

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as experiments and research, which prove wonderful for human life.

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, Graham Bell made a more powerful invention, which is

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. It has made people's lives not only more convenient, but one can

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connect with their loved ones without any geographic barriers. 

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money-minded are seen as selfish and do not sacrifice for

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, people have contributed a lot. In fact, they make a big

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to developing employment and

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pay taxes to the state.

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amount is utilized for

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as pensioners , social funds like medical, education and other factors .

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contribution

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may not be systemically clear,  their significant

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is still undeniable.

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, they are the most successful , thanks to their invisible

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to

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. To conclude, whilst

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and

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have an ideal role in

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, one who has lots of money can participate in

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's development from the view of their financial budget.