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Some people think about the best way to improve road safety is to make vehicles driver take a test every year.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, the number of
road
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 accidents has increased exponentially because of reckless driving.  Owing to
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, some individuals think that taking a driving
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 each year is necessary as a means of
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. I
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 assent with
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 notion,  that it should be compulsory to update not only
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rules
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 and
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 but
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 their physical fitness.  Undoubtedly, the carelessness of
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rules
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 and
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 on roads is a key reason for
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 accidents. 
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, if governments of every country try to impose new
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 or
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 and conduct a
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 of the old ones, they will update them every year in order to mitigate these problems.
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, conducting driver's tests every year should help them to obey these
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 on roads for
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 purposes .
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, an empirical study conducted by Oxford University reveals that 90% of drivers can drive properly if they were given a yearly exam of driving
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 and
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.
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, getting physical fitness information through a driving
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 can help them to update about their physical weaknesses .To explain
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, the number of
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 accidents happens because of some medical issues
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 as eyesight problems and heart attacks.
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 , if experienced people are given a driving
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 annually, they will know about their health as well as become able to drive safely on roads.  To conclude, there is no doubt that updating
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 and
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 and physical fitness is significant for
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 on the
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.
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