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The key to solving the environmental problem is simple: the present generation is willing to accept a less comfortable life for the sake of the future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the most practical solution for solving the environmental issues would be sacrificing the comfort of
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 for the future
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. There is some truth in
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, I feel that the target can be better met if we use the
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 wisely.
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generation
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 accepts a less comfortable life, they are not only saving the
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 for their future generations but
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 reducing the intensity of polluting the environment in various ways. To be precise, if a person starts going to work on public transport system rather than in his own car, he can save fuel, and at the same time, the air and noise pollution can be brought down. A similar effect can be seen when people control their consumerist behaviour.
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, one has to understand that cutting down the comforts of the present world is like living a life of previous generations. To explain it
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, in
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 technologically advanced era, it is difficult for a person to sacrifice his comfort and convenience. As a better solution, I would suggest
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 the
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 in the most productive manner.
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, eco-friendly cars can be used
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 of petrol cars.
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, non-biodegradable products like plastic can be either reused or recycled properly rather than using it just once and throwing irrationally. To conclude, in order to solve the environmental problems, it is a good idea to save
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future generations by sacrificing the comforts of the present
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, it is better to go for the best option: the wise use of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable living
  • excessive consumption
  • environmental degradation
  • technological advancements
  • innovation
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable farming
  • waste management
  • policy changes
  • global cooperation
  • balanced approach
  • sacrifice
  • awareness
  • sustainability
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