Nowadays technology is increasing being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is certainly true that technology is involved in many squares of
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's lives. Many of these innovations can track what
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do and about what they talk
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most occasions, the individuals are not even aware of these. While questions have been raised regarding whether there are more benefits than drawbacks, in my view,
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definitely do not outweigh the advantages of it. On the one hand,
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have their
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privacy. They can have private talks and their own spaces without anyone monitoring them.
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, cameras can not be installed in citizens' houses without them knowing and confirming it. As well as, it is not right to listen to
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others
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talks
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without any
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for doing
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, these innovations can not be used in private spaces.
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,
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, there are more advantages of
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technology. The major of them is that it helps the security and police staff to track
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actions. Especially if they go against the law.
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, individuals have to be monitored in shops, cinemas and institutions, because if some robbery happens or even a major crime, a person who has done it has to be caught.
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, some particular calls of dangerous
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have to be listened to
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prevent some types of crime. In conclusion, it can be said that, even though sometimes it is
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unappropriate
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inappropriate
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to watch after someone,
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drawback does not outweigh the main benefit of it that criminals will be recognised and caught after what they have done.
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, to be successful, cameras should be just in public places, and calls should be tracked
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a vital reason for it.
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