Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has negative impact on the countries travelled to, To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Travelling around the world become

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hobby. It widens horizons, enriches life

experience

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experiences

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and makes good memories. There are people, who consider that

tourists

affect negatively to countries, where they came to.

However

, I am largely in agreement with the fact that

travelers

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travellers

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bring benefits rather than having

negative

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a negative

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impact.

First

of all,

high

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wave of

tourists

positively

affect

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to

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the

countries

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economy.

Tourists

tend to buy presents for their relatives while travelling.

Moreover

,

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wave

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a wave

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of

tourists

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,tourists

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the number of places

such

as

hotel

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hotels

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or restaurant increase,

consequently

,

unemployment

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the unemployment

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rate of

country

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the country

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will witness

decrease

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.

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, according to research conducted in 2013, in Turkey,

in

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every summer, the employment rate

increased

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to

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0.5

percent

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related to the wave of

tourists

.

Furthermore

, travelling around the world provides

exchange

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an exchange

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of lifestyle, culture and food. Owing to it, people are on

this

level of

growing

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.

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, globalization

lead

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to the development of

cousin

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in many countries.

However

, negative impacts are

of

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apply

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no exception. Destruction of nature, pollution or propaganda can happen while there are

tourists

.

Also

, cultural shock may bring difficulties, misunderstanding and lead to bad relations between two nations. In conclusion, there can be moments, when

tourists

bring

negative

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impact

to

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on

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the nations they

travelled

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travel

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to, including pollution, destruction of nature, but considering

positive

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the positive

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impacts they have, in my opinion advantages outweigh them