Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear, sir, I am writing about my current situation and I will

be join

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later in your company because of my

mother

is

suffuring

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suffering

from stomach problem since two years. so, I am making

plan

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a plan

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to admit

popular

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a popular

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hospital

whereas

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where

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, professor Dr. will be available there. In

this

situation

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I must explain about my family where there are only 3

member

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members

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in my family,

Mother

sister and me. I am quite responsible for my family. You know that I am an employee of your company that

i

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have just

recieved

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received

my appointment letter but

i

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I

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have not got chance to start my job with

reason

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the reason

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of my

mother

's illness. Recently, I am going to

india

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India

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tomorrow particularly "Medanta Hospital", Delhi for treatment of my

mother

whereas I heard that long experienced doctor will treat the patient. My other family member

also

advice

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me to go there and

i

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made a plan to

departure

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depart

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by aeroplane tomorrow. I hope you will decide with my favour so,

i

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will come back to home within a week

then

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will start my job. yours sincerely Bimal