Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start

#employer #situation

Dear, sir, I am writing about my current situation and I will

be join

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later in your company because of my

mother

suffuring

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suffering

from stomach problem since two years. so, I am making

plan

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to admit

popular

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hospital

whereas

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, professor Dr. will be available there. In

this

situation

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I must explain about my family where there are only 3

member

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in my family,

Mother

sister and me. I am quite responsible for my family. You know that I am an employee of your company that

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have just

recieved

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received

my appointment letter but

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have not got chance to start my job with

reason

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the reason

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of my

mother

's illness. Recently, I am going to

india

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India

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tomorrow particularly "Medanta Hospital", Delhi for treatment of my

mother

whereas I heard that long experienced doctor will treat the patient. My other family member

also

advice

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me to go there and

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made a plan to

departure

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by aeroplane tomorrow. I hope you will decide with my favour so,

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will come back to home within a week

then

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will start my job. yours sincerely Bimal

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

183 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

The increasing presence of multinational companies and globalization is believed by some to have positive implications for everyone involved. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people prefer to live in small family units, while other think it is better to live in large family groups. discuss both view and give your opinion.

In some developing countries, disabled people are not given proper access to public and private facilities. What are some possible effects of this problem and solutions to it

Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him/her to a party at your home and include the following: what the party is about give directions on how to get to your place suggest how to accommodate him/her

Some people say that all secondary and higher secondary school students should be taught how to manage money as it is an important skill. Do you agree or disagree with this argument?