Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear Sir/ Ma'am l. I am writing

this

letter to you inform that I am not able to start the job

month due to an accident. Unfortunately,I had an accident yesterday on the way to my home, once I finished my interview. At the same time, I was hospitalized due to a leg break.

However

, the doctor decided that I have to do surgery immediately.

In addition

, they recommend bread rest for at least one month.

Moreover

, I believe that after one month I Will be able to step as normal. In that case, I would start work on the 13th of May. I had talked to one of your colleagues Julia, she promised me whatever the missing work will cover all the work during my absence days. I hope you will bear with me and I expect your support. I looked forward to your kind assistance Yours sincerely, Thisara Madusanka.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

151 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

Some suggest than young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the itadvantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer, and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantage of this development outweighs the disadvantages?

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?