You recently received a letter from a friend asking for an advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. you think that he should get a job write a letter to your friend.

Hi John, Hope you are doing well & safe in
this
epidemic situation. I got your letter
this
Sunday along with your warm wishes & love. I just wanted to share my feedback on your decision of whether to pursue higher study or to find any employment. I would say it's better to stick to any firm from where you will start earning.
This
will enable you to get practical experience as well as you can look after your mother.
In addition
to ,that you can start a
relavant
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relevant
online course which will boost your career as well.
This
is just my point of view,
however
,
this
is
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completely
depend
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on you to choose the right option which helps you to learn as well as earn. Anyways, just let me know your decision over the phone & I will meet you by
next
month at your place. Best Regards,
Afsar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Juncture
  • Firsthand
  • Practical skills
  • Theoretical focus
  • Financial independence
  • Career advancement
  • Real-world experience
  • Part-time studies
  • Online courses
  • Financial stability
  • Career goals
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