Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Nowadays, some
people
argue that we are living in the best
time
in history. In
this
essay,
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would like to give my opinion about
this
argument and discuss other
time
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times
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in history that
people
would like to live in. In my point of view, it is true that now is the best
time
to live in because
of
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a
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main reason. The most important reason is that we are living in modern civilisation. Due to the development of technology,
human
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are experiencing
convenient
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a convenient
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
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.
For instance
, in recent
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, there are many cutting-edge household
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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that help women decrease pressure in household life
such
as
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dishwasher
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washer
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washers
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, washing
machine
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machines
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or
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and
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vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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. The other example is that because of globalisation,
people
are reducing the
time
to communicate with each other
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using modern technology facilities. In the past,
people
need to take two days or more than one month to send letters or messages to their family.
However
, nowadays
people
just take two minutes to call and see their family
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though
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smart phone
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.
On the other hand
, some
people
believe that there is other
time
that
people
would like to live
such
as in the past.
Although
people
did not have modern technology in the past, they still felt happy and interesting.
This
is because
people
can spend spare
time
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talking and playing together
instead
of focusing on social media and
smart phone
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.
Besides
that, in the
past
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people
did not have to face
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a lot of
enviromental
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environmental
problems
such
as air pollution and global warming compared
with
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now.
Therefore
, some
people
think that
past
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may be
good
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time
to live in In conclusion, it seems to me that now is the best
time
to live but
human
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humans
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should have stable development to keep the best things
in
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the past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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