Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
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times
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for
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main reason. The most important reason is that we are living in modern civilisation. Due to the development of technology, Change the article
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convenient
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a convenient
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lifestyles
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equipments
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people
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On the other hand
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people
believe that there is other Use synonyms
time
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people
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such
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people
did not have modern technology in the past, they still felt happy and interesting. Use synonyms
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people
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instead
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people
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enviromental
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environmental
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now. Change preposition
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, some Linking Words
people
think that Use synonyms
past
may be Correct article usage
the past
good
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a good
time
to live in
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time
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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