Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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One of the recently debated social topics is whether the authorities should govern

rules

for recycling or not.

In other words

, some

people

think that

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reusing of

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waste

is inadequate and governments should make

people

recycle more by different

rules

.I strongly agree with those

rules

and in

this

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I am going to prove

this

idea with different reasons.

Firstly

, governments should make

rules

for recycling and have penalties for those who do not obey those

rules

Moreover

, there can be some incentive

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for the

people

who follow the laws.

For example

, some

guidlines

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guidelines

can be sent to public organizations for reusing their

waste

which can inform them about the advantages of recycling the

waste

Furthermore

, there can be some policies which encourage disciplined

people

who recycle their garbages regularly.

For example

, they can buy

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ticket

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cheaper prices.

Secondly

culture

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the culture

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of recycling should be

teached

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taught

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by some social

campaignes

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campaigns

campaigners

People

in rural areas should be informed more about the benefits of recycling.

For example

, schools and universities can educate students

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through

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workshops, related conferences and educational trips about recycling.

For instance

, if the

people

were well-prepared for recycling, they would recycle their garbages without any

rules

. To summarise, legislation is the easiest and the fastest way for increasing the reusing the

waste

but education can be a

complement

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for

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governing the

rules

too.

Moreover

, the government should

takes

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steps for supporting the responsible organizations which are informing

people

about environmental issues and

on the other hand

makes laws that enhance the recycling eventually.

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