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Nowadays in some countries children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Some people believe it is a positive development while other argue otherwise. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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The right behaviour with the younger generation has been a subject of debate. Though in some regions
parents
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 give fewer
tasks
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 to their juveniles than they did in the past.
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 some individuals believe
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 can positively affect them,
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 hold the opposite opinion. We can not easily say
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if it is a positive or negative development and we must consider both views. Those who believe that
children
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 must be given a number of
responsibilities
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 have great reasonings for their belief.
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, juveniles will develop social skills and will learn how to behave appropriately in society.
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, in my own experience, I've learnt how to save my money, because, my father asked me to manage a certain amount of money on a trip.
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,
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 who have to do many
tasks
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 will find their values
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 life much sooner than the
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,
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, they will mentally grow faster.
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 as learning why should they respect
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, and why should they take care of their family.
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,
others
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 think the opposite, while suggesting that
children
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 must be assigned fewer
responsibilities
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 than before. They insist that youngsters must be free to explore the world and find their own life path rather than being busy fulfilling adults' desires.
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, a child may be interested in doing arts, but his
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 give him
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 to do math and science. Like my own
parents
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 who valued science more than anything else.
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, if
children
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 are not bound to
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, they will eventually develop their creativity and their mind will be opening up to new ideas in the future.
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, my uncle
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was the youngest among his siblings, so he had all the attention of his
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 and became a successful artist. In conclusion,
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 many people believe that
children
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 must be given fewer
responsibilities
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 these days,
others
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 think differently and suggest that we should reduce their
responsibilities
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. The former
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 numerous
tasks
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 will help them to develop social skills and the latter says youngsters should find their path on their own. In my way of thinking it's better to let
children
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 be free in their choices rather than thinking about fulfilling their
parents
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' expectations.
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