Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

Children

's

health

are

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increasingly deteriorating by fatness throughout the world, even condition is pretty alarming among the world's most affluent western countries.There are a number of

reason

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causing

this

problem

and each

problem

needs to be dealt

in

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a particular way. It is likely that one of the most prominent

cause

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causes

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giving rise to

this

problem

is the major change in our lifestyle due to remarkable advancement and

shophistication

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sophistication

in technology, which has

considerable

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impact on our daily life and

health

.

These

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advancement comes at a cast with

the

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adverse impact on our

health

due to lack of physical activity and laziness in

office

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and home.At

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office

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most of the

poeple

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people

suffering from

this

illness spend many hours sitting in front of the computer without any physical activity.Not only

this

even at home most of us spend time watching TV and taking rest

at

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their

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bedroom.Even

children

nowadays give preference to playing

computer

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game

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or chatting on

internet

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with their friends rather than playing

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outdoor

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out door

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sports.

In addition

to

that

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the quality of foods which we

consumes

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every day made the matters worse.These foods , which are easily available ,

oftenly

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often

contains ingredients that are high in calorie ,

cholestral

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cholesterol

and fat , while at the same time lack necessary vitamin , mineral and

protien

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protein

and these factors are taking a toll on our

health

.

Moreover

, these significant changes

has

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begun showing up adverse effect on our

health

.

Children

from many

country

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countries

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are suffering from obesity , fatness and fatness related diseases

such

as heart disease ,

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cancer

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cancel

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cancer

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and sugar.

As a

result

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it is

imperating

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imperative

importing

that we should fight collectively hand in hand against

this

huge

problem

before it poses a threat to our

health

system. In my opinion, teachers,

parent

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and

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government

goverment

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as a whole should take

this

issue as a matter of urgency and take

necessary

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step

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to

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overcome

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over come

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at every

stages

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.

For

instance

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parents are expected to keep an eye on

thier

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their

children

's eating

habit

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habits

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and make sure they take healthy food while reducing the

quanity

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quantity

quality

of luring junk food.Government can contribute by

puting

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putting

a ban on unhealthy items

specialy

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specially

prepared

keeping

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in mind

to

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children

. To conclude,

although

many countries are

now a days

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nowadays

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falling prey to unhealthy diet

but

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we can fight and defeat

this

menace with strong

will power

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willpower

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and

taking

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by taking

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some preventive actions as described above.