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Many people feel that media coverage has becoming increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

#people #media #coverage
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Media
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 is known as the fourth pillar of India because it is the voice of the poor and victim
people
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.
Media
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 help
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 to get justice and ask questions to the
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,
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 raise their voices about any wrong decisions.
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, it is seen that nowadays
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 only cover partial or incorrect information
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 of unbiased report. The reason behind
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 is a target rating point
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 known as TRP.
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, the
government
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 should make a few stringent laws against these
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 reports.
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 elaboration related to
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 with, nowadays, all the
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channels
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 want to come on top position, so they serve the
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 in an interesting way rather than on facts. They know how to please the
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 and how to spread fake propaganda so they can target a huge population to watch their channel.
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, a lot of time it is seen that they hide the half-truth and make their own stories which had a very negative impact on the past.
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, a report from Oxford University in 2021 stated that in India 90% of the cases of violence caused by
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 due to their wrong reporting hurt the sentiments of two different religions. By creating fake agenda
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media
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 get good stories for their
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 and it helps them to increase TRP.
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, these are the reasons behind
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 trend.
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,
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 trend has very dangerous impacts on countries like India, as
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 is a biodiverse nation all the
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 from different cultural backgrounds have been living here ;
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, any fake
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 can increase the chances of violation. The
government
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 should make a few strict laws against it and
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 take stringent action against fake
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channels
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.
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,
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 should stop watching these
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 and
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 complain about these types of
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media
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 in the police stations;
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, the authority take action against these
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.
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, a report from Times Now in 2020 stated that if the
people
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 stop watching these
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channels
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 and support only unbiased
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then
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 these fake
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 reporters have no other option and have to cover only the right
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. thi are some remedies which can be helpful to cure
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 problem. In conclusion, the
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 cover biased
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 because they just want to increase their TRP graph and attract a number of
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 to watch their
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 ;
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, the
government
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 should take action against these
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also
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people
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 should not watch these
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 channel. They should support unbiased
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.
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