The phenomenon of a rising juvenile delinquency rate is of great concern to society, and both families and society are responsible for that.
Although
it is not easy to solve the problem, there are still several effective steps
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be imposed.
There are various reasons which induce
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, and two main aspects worth more
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. There is no doubt that
parents
are accountable for that. Owing to the growing life cost,
parents
are busy earning money.
That is
to say, they lack adequate time to supervise their
children
. Without adults' accompany, it is extremely likely that
children
mix with
kids. Another reason is that numerous TV
and computer
games
mislead young people. Because of the
and reward pattern,
children
are highly likely to be addicted to the
games
. Whereas,
children
's obsession with violent computer
games
,
role-playing
games
, is dangerous for the
games
are a par with the best military technology in
kids to murder.
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excessive violence in mass media, which
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aggressive. Teenagers are
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, immature and
, with the misleading, they easily go astray.
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efforts from
parents
, schools and
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are required.
Firstly
, it is of paramount importance that
parents
spend more time with their kids, in the meantime, build a sense of responsibility to their
children
.
Secondly
, educators should pay more attention to
children
's
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and mental health. Since school is not a place just imparting knowledge, it
also
plays a dominant role in
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high moral values.
Last
but not least, it is of great urgency for authorities to censor TV
and computer
games
which are popular with young people,
also
content should be restricted.
To conclude, both families and society have asserted adverse
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on young people.
However
, if
parents
, schools and governments make efforts together, the situation would be addressed to some extent.