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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter -Explain why you have moved -Describe the new apartment -Invite him or her to pay a visit

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I would like to give the information about my moving to the other house. My old accommodation was far from my university and on the street where was located my old
home
 there was not any transport, Every time when I wanted to go out I had to take a taxi. So I decided to change my house. So I have changed my house and I am living in my new separate
home
. My new
home
 is
2-floor
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a 2-floor
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 building which has 3 bedrooms, 1 hall , 2 bathrooms, and a large kitchen . My new
home
 has a nice yard with a garden there are different types of trees and flowers. In the yard of my building is a corner for children and I think it is convenient for a family. I wish to invite you with your family to come to me because it will be a nice chance to have an interesting time together . I would like to inform you that I will pay your visit. Dear Zohrab
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Greeting
Begin your letter with a greeting, such as 'Dear [Name],' to immediately establish a connection with your reader.
Closing
Conclude your letter with an appropriate closing, such as 'Warm regards, [Your Name].' This will provide a more polished and personal touch to your correspondence.
Coherence
Use transitions and linking words to connect ideas smoothly between sentences and paragraphs. This will enhance the flow of your text and make it easier for the reader to follow.
Task Response
To increase task achievement, ensure that all parts of the prompt are fully addressed with adequate detail. Your response should include explicit and developed explanations for each point.
Tone
Employ a friendlier and more personal tone throughout your letter. Personal anecdotes or expressions of enthusiasm can make your letter more engaging and appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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