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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, climate changes, a dramatic increase in population and obstacles to education are the common
problems
 and unfortunately, every
country
 in the world is facing them. In
this
 essay, I would like to discuss how will my
country
 face some issues in the coming ten years and what steps should be taken to solve them.
To begin
 with, the main worrying points of my
country
 are environmental changes and fewer study resources.
Firstly
, Forests have almost been destroyed by humans. They use wood in manufacturing furniture and building household things. The tree's cutting ratio is very high as compared to the plantation of trees. As result, the weather is becoming hot day by day and
also
 another kind of climate change.
Secondly
, due to the economical situation of my
country
, the
government
 is unable to provide helpful facilities in study departments. Scholarships are being ended and institute fees are very high. Whereas jobs and income are very low,
Therefore
, in the coming ,decade our people would face many
problems
. As the solution to these
problems
, the
government
 and the public will have to play an essential role.
Government
 should force the public to terminate plant cutting and
also
 motivate them to form new plants.
Furthermore
, people should try to avoid wooden manufacturing and choose another material to build these daily-life things.
In addition
, if the
government
 introduces some scholarships and
also
 facilities the public with low-cost education, students can learn and earn easily. They should offer free skilled training which will help them in their earning. In conclusion, as we have already discussed that climate changes and education hurdles are the key issues in my
country
 and
government
 and societies should play a role to overcome these
problems
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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