It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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It has become a trend for
students
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to prefer to have a
one
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year
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break between high
school
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and tertiary
education
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. The advantages of
this
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are
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firstly
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, It is considered
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a chance for
students
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to decide what career they will choose, and
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, working
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this
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year
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will give them the opportunity to save some
money
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to continue their
education
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.
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, the drawbacks of
this
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are losing the interest to continue studying
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and may
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in casual work their whole life. The
first
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merit of
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is to choose what subjects they will study. During high
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,
students
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are overwhelmed with their studying of different subjects and are not able to choose what kind of tertiary
education
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they will study.
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of
this
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, it is a good opportunity to have a
one
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year
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break to think about the career they would like to have. The
second
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advantage is to gain some cash to cover some of their expenses during
university
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studying.
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, because
university
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education
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is not free,
students
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have to have some
money
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to spend during
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period.
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, the majority of
university
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degrees in Canada require quite a lot of
money
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.
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, losing interest in continuing
education
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is
one
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of the most important drawbacks. If high
school
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graduates left
education
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for a
year
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, they might leave
education
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for good.
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means that they get used to
work
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every day, which might lead them to prefer working
instead
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of going back to
school
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.
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,
students
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may like their job and prefer not to leave it, which means that they would continue their lives and make a family with these minimum wages.
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, there was a study conducted at Queen's
University
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that showed that most of the
students
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who have taken a
one
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year
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vacation have never gone back to
school
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. In conclusion, the main merits of having a
one
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year
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off after high
school
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are choosing their career and saving some
money
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for tertiary
education
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. The disadvantages of
this
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are staying
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this
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kind of
low income
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job and do not like to go back for higher
education
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gap year
  • work experience
  • internships
  • traveling
  • life experiences
  • personal development
  • independent
  • self-reliant
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  • financial burden
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