Problem: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country and give your opinion.

In

the

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modern society, it is widely accepted that

people

migrate to another country either to work or settle with

the

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family. Whilst, other groups may oppose

this

new idea. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will examine the benefits and drawbacks

to

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this

argument. Nowadays, going to another country has become a trend. One of the

reason

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for

this

is to search for

a better opportunity opportunities

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.

People

who decided to go abroad have worked to help send money back to their homes, and others

also

get jobs and seek to become citizens to petition their families. As the prime factor to enhance the kind of their living. Another reason, for ,

this

is to explore the world, meet other

people

and experience different cultures.

People

who walk out of their comfort zone could widen their knowledge

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various cultures and traditions, and broaden their horizons.

Therefore

, strengthening the bonds of multiple nations across the world.

Additionally

,

this

may

also

create business opportunities both local and international if relations deepen.

On the other hand

, not all foreigners learn to accept guest nationals for work as

this

could threaten domestic employment.

For example

, many employers tend to hire manpower from other countries as

this

can cost them much lower without compromising the quality of service.

As a result

, discrimination may occur.

Moreover

, learning a

second

language has

also

become a challenge. It is

also

noted that one of the problems in a foreign land is a misunderstanding.

As a result

, communication barriers could lead to conflict. In my point of view, I still believe that beneficial effects offset the disadvantages in

this

argument because language can be learned through practice. And by doing your best to have good performance in your job, others will be encouraged to do so.

Thus

, eliminating differences at work. In conclusion, living and seeking a job in another country can improve the lifestyle of an individual,

although

there are many bumps yet to conquer with perseverance, all things will be paid.