Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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the life expectations are getting higher,

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people

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living longer and the society is the

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to take

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of the ancients.

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essay will discuss if

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society is prepared to do it and the most adequate method to do it.

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, I consider it is evident that our community is not ready to manage the increment of elderly people, despite it sounds

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insensitive

as well as depressing, it is a reality and an example of

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is the number of major adults abandoned on the streets or isolated in clinics or aged

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with no visits form their families. why? Because they

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just like a problem, they are not productive anymore and so are unnecessary for us.

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, in countries like

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one of the most critical industries with

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of employees is

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age

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care

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, the people do not even want to work

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that age because it means too much work for inequivalent salaries.

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, to improve

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situation I suggest two alternatives, both

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the same importance.

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, enrich relationships with our older relatives

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encourage families to offer their support acknowledging their effort to

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us.

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and in charge of the government, estipulate better incomes and incentives for professionals who develop

care

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activities

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for these ages,

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, the workers will be enough for the demand.

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, if individuals willing to work in

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industry get better economic conditions, sponsored education, and easier procedures to migrate they will feel more motivated and with enough reasons to perform

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their job. to conclude, in my

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our society is not ready to assume the

care

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of old adults due to the

persoective

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perspective

that we have of them,

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why modifications on families dynamics and benefits for carers

are urgently need

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are urgently needed

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