Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticisms on their teachers. Others think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the past decades, the world has evolved in terms of technological advancements.

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, people believe that the education system still

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to develop. Many people dispute that high schools should provoke their

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to

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remarks to their

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. Whereas, there are some who have different views about

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. They think allowing

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to criticize their

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will cause a decline

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and discipline in the classes. The arguments on both sides of

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controversial issue will be discussed in the following paragraphs in turn, and

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, my opinion will be given. On the one hand, some opponents are quick to point out that there are various reasons to consider getting advantages of permitting

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to ask and conduct

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. Before all else, asking

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makes more benefits

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a children's development. The more

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they ask, the more

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they get. In order to improve the educational quality, the learners should be learnt mentally and physically, and the teaching methods

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should be perfect.

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,

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need to be fully qualified to avoid negative incidents between

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and

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, the government should implement a suitable skill assessment

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a teacher before appointing them,

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as checking whether they are patient and

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or not.

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, other proponents have

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expressed an equal view that there are several drawbacks of

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issue regarding

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discipline.

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of all, mutual

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plays a pivotal role in

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learners and their masters. If someone makes a question in the way of silly and rude, the person who has been asked will feel

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and negative sentiment. In fact, it is really annoying if someone takes advantage of the permit to ask

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to the

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. To avoid

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situation becoming any worse, parents should teach their kids about manners, personalities, and how to show

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to their

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. In conclusion,

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there are some disadvantages and

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, I passionately believe that the benefits will outshine the disadvantages by letting the

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to asking

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and

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critical comments.