Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. Do you agree or disagree?

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of the past and should be preserved, in the view of some

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With their existence along each road, it is undeniable that no sooner does younger

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generation grow up than they become proud of their country’s admirable old-day history through the image of

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, ceilings, and walls. Philosophically speaking, like a person who clings to the past to reflect, views the present to enjoy and contemplates the future, a city itself entails an inextricable link between these three-time axes to revise, thrive and fly.

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, it's not unusual for three to four households families to only have only one toilet system with their wall painting layers bound. Their walls and ceilings are likely to peel off and their ceilings sagging owing to weathering. because of the weather. Another rationale is that these old

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of serenebygone eras. The tiny old days. Townhouses resemble oases to those who are sucking in a life of craze, the tiny old

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resemble oases to ease their stress.craziness. Opponents have their points in the belief that,

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investors from other continents pay greater attention, which, in turn, generates a huge amount of profit for the entire nation. In the final analysis, each idea has its own reasoning, but in my opinion, the presence of old

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is essential to the survival of any city

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