Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society then musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?
Doctors, researchers, and computer specialists are thought to be more respected than entertainers
such
as singers and actors. Although
artificial intelligence developers like Elon Musk and Bill Gates are famous for their works
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works
connect at personal levels with them.
Actors, singers, comedians, and TV personalities often interact with general audiences through live shows on social media. Because most creatives freely express themselves and connect with their fans
as regular citizens, slowly, trust between them is established. That is
why, when celebrities
discuss serious topics such
as climate change and racial discrimination, their supporters become aware and support the cause. For example
, more global citizens become aware about
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works
of these celebrities
impact their fans
personally. Many songs from BTS and Katty Perry, for example
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have entertained many who cannot express their problems freely and because of this
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celebrities
' loyal supporters. With more buying the singers' albums, generally, it can be seen that modern individuals respect and value their idols more than the
scientists.
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celebrities
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