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Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Undoubtedly, mobile phones have become a necessity rather than a luxury. Certain sections of society believe that modern
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 like cell phones are having a detrimental impact on their users by dramatically affecting their social life. In my opinion, I strongly agree with
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 notion because of the following reasons mentioned in the forthcoming paragraphs supported with examples.
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, these
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 are extremely addictive, which not only prevents their users from losing self-confidence
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 but
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 affects their overall mental health. To explain more about
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 generally use cellphone for most of the time, while using these
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 they are soo engrossed that they are mentally detached from the external world.
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, extensive use can eventually cause mental disorders like depression and social anxiety.
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, a recent survey conducted by the medical school of London, considered a sample of 100
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, where 90 of them were given a task to use Instagram (a social media app) , while others were asked to read books. It was found that these 90 folks were more reticent to the public when asked questions about general life,
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 remaining were more cooperative with
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 when they were interviewed with the same questions.
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,
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 are preferring more virtual friends as compared
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 real humans.
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 often connect with others using
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 application. Users have a proclivity to connect and chat with
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 whom they have never met in their life.
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, in some ,countries
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 compete with each other to have more friends on these social media applications. As a consequence,
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 are estranged from the world where they reside causing a bonding gap with the physical world.
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,in a recent survey carried out by a group of psychologists in India, on average,
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 in India have approximately 500 friends on Facebook, out of which they personally know only 50.
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, it was found that these individuals seldom meet new
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 on several occasions and prefer a more isolated lifestyle. To conclude, these advanced
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 have not only damaged humans' social interaction abilities, but
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 it is causing them to be estranged from society, thereby inviting several mental problems.
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