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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organizations. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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Nowadays different types of employment are regular especially the self-employment is getting more popular. Many
people
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 prefer to work for themselves
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 of
companies
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 or organizations.
This
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 leads to some
benefits
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 for them, but there are some drawbacks, as well.
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 with, these days a lot of
people
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 tend to be self-employed and it brings them several advantages. Self-employed
people
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 have more flexibility in their working time and even more freedom in working types and working days.
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, they are more likely to be able to earn more money, especially for clever and motivated
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 than staff in
companies
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.
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, an expert website designer can do a lot of projects with better-earning conditions
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 of hiring with a constant salary.
Self-employers
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 even have more opportunities to learn more and make personal development due to the variety of
people
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 and
companies
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 and projects that they are involved in.
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,
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 type of employment has some issues alongside its
benefits
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. Projects and tasks probably do not spread appropriately in time and for these
people
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, it is more likely to have to work overtime and
very
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 hard for a while and have much free-time rest time.
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, self-employing is more likely to be unstable, especially during specific conditions like the covid-19 pandemic.
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,
self-employers
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 do not have many
benefits
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 that organizations provide including sick pay and insurance. In conclusion, despite having several advantages that
self-employers
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 have due to freedom and more earnings, working in
companies
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 and organizations has many
benefits
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 as well which
self-employers
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 cannot achieve.
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