You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to raise my concern regarding a camera that I purchased
last
week. I visited your London Airport store on May 3rd and purchased a camera from there. The Bill number of the article is S436325 and I am enclosing a copy of the bill for your reference. The service executive handed me over a new sealed box when I selected the model of my choice. Due to the hurried purchase, I could not check it
then
and there as I was getting late for the flight.
However
, when I unboxed it after reaching back to India, I found that the memory card and battery charger were missing and it is of no use to me without these items. As It is not possible for me to visit that store personally so I need your assistance to look into
this
matter and provide either a replacement for the kit or the missing items. Looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Yours faithfully, Richa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • local representative
  • important items missing
  • purchase details
  • model and brand
  • missing accessories
  • inconvenience
  • use to its full extent
  • urgent request
  • partial refund
  • alternative solution
  • exchange unit
  • correct the issue
  • look forward to your prompt response
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