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Do you think having a mobile phone is a necessary nowadays? Why? Explain your view and give examples from your own experience.

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Currently
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 we are living in times when it is not
such
 a rare circumstance to have a mobile phone in our lives.
Furthermore
, many stores are changing to
an
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electric
machine
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instead
 of human beings. Most definitely, the
first
 thing I would do is to explain my living situation thoroughly.
For example
, I can communicate whenever or wherever with my family through a “Face app”.
This
 is not the only thing to connect my parents,
however
, but it is
also
 helped me to access more easily and quickly. In spite
of
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, mail and letters are considered the place and time.
On the other hand
, I would have to look for ways to use it effectually to not addict it. So the all-electric devices are easy to access that we have to check our use pattern. In summary, having a mobile phone is necessary for our life. Absolutely, they give us convenience but we must be careful of using them.
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