Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

One of the widespread problems nowadays is bullying in schools
this
essay will discuss the
reason
and solution for
this
problem.
Firstly
the
reason
why bullying is a big issue in school is due to some student
thinking
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that he is better than other students and
start
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to dominate
others
, another
reason
that
this
person is subjected to violence when he was a child.
For instance
, the child gets hit by his father or by
others
then
tries to copy them by bullying
others
,
also
some people have weak personalities and try to hide it by bullying
others
and some kids fear telling their parents that some other children bullying them the bullying continues.
Moreover
, there are several solutions to
this
problem one solution is for the school to hire a psychological counsellor to help the undergraduate and discuss with them their feelings and make some
class
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about the bullying and encouraged the children to tell their parents or teacher if anyone one bullying them,
also
the teacher could talk about the bullying and the negative effects of bullying on student,
such
as Some scholar commits suicide and
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will have a psychological issue in the future, the parent rsponabilty to monitor their child and check his body and have good relationships with their son to tell them if anyone has bullied him In Conclusion, the
reason
for bullying is a lot.
For example
, some students think themself is better than
others
and students have
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weak personality.
Furthermore
, some solutions are School hired psychological counsellors to help the student
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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