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Some people decided to have children in their late age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #children #age #outweigh
The modern
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 society has seen a
declined
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willing
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 of young
people
 to have a baby.
Distinguised
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Distinguished
 from their parent and grandparent generation, they tend to postpone their plans for a kid.
However
, overall
this
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phenomenon
 brings young
people
 more advantages than disadvantages. In
this
 article, I will
first
 analyse why
young
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 population choose to have kids late nowadays and
then
 explain why the pros outweigh the cons. Not only haven't they prepared well mentally, the
practcal
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practical
 issues
such
 as lacking
of
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money and
stemina
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stamina
 are
also
 their
obstables
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obstacles
 to have children at their early ages. On the one hand, many
people
 claim that they are
resistent
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resistant
 to being pregnant and raising a kid is that they do not like kids, and they attribute
this
 mindset to their childhood
experience
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such
 as bullie and their parents' failed
marige
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marriage
marine
.
On the other hand
, there is a group of young
people
 who love kids but
blocked
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 by material factors like money and time.
People
at
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 their 20s or 30s have exceedingly
heavey
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heavy
 financial
burdern
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burden
 and
workload
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workloads
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,
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 and are unlikely to spend time
to look
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 after a single baby, not to mention 2 or more.
Therefore
,
people
 tend to have children late than before due to their
peasonal
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personal
 experience or the
burdern
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burden
. Despite
of
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the fact that having
baby
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a baby
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 late has become a new normal choice
amoung
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among
 the new generation, the
mirits
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merits
markets
 surpass the
demirits
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demerits
 given that the
contenmporay
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contemporary
 society has changed.
First
, the young
people
 gain more time
to
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 the career development since they don't need to spend many years accompanying an infant.
Second
, following their free mind and personal choice can make them
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feel
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fell
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feel
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 less stressed and more
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at peace
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peace
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peaceful
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. Admittedly, they may regret
in
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it in
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 the future or feel bothered by the social or peer
presure
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pressure
, they can have remedies
such
 as
adopt
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adopting
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 a kid. To summarize, in general, the generation
tend
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tends
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 to be in
favor
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favour
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 of
the
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late birth due to mental
obstables
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obstacles
 or practical issues.
However
, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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