Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Marketing strategies nowadays have their own pros and cons. There is a population who says it only cost us to spend money on useless
things
, while others see it to be helpful in things
that may contribute to our daily living. This
essay will argue that advertisements tell us about new products
that may improve our lives.
Communities are sometimes deceived by these advertisements. Businessmen will really make their way just to earn which will lead other communities to be deceived by their products
. For example
, ads
on our Facebook sometimes appear in our news feeds which also
sometimes encourages us through their low price strategies. Because of the low price offered, society tends to buy those products
though they don't really need them. Therefore
, these ads
encourage the public to buy those products
even without thinking about their usage of it.
On the other side, publishing business ads
will somehow help us to know products
that may be helpful for a specific task. Society who are not fond of reading magazines will surely enjoy watching tv commercial ads
. For example
, TV commercials mostly show trends in technology these days. A newly improvised floor map with a squeezer will surely encourage the public, for it may give lighter tasks in mapping the floor. Therefore
, these business ads
, somehow help the public to discover new things
which will, later on, has a good contribution.
In conclusion, this
essay argued that some societies say, advertising encourages the population to buy things
which are unnecessary, while other communities say that it tells us about new products
that we needed to discover. In my opinion, I agree that advertising helps us in discovering new products
which may be helpful to our lives.Submitted by shielanyann on
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