Some people believe that we should celebrate National Holidays, Whilst others oppose the idea and say that the Government should invest this money in health and education. Discuss Both Views and What is your personal opinion in this regard.

Investment in national holidays is a waste of
money
, our
government
should be prioritizing to spend
money
on the hospital and education sectors. I will discuss both sides and share my opinion in support of
second
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statement in subsequent paragraphs.
First
of all, National occasions are commended with incredible joy and 23rd March is a major occasion in the history of the resolution of Pakistan. On that day,
Government
announces a long March and National Day joint service parade which shows the exhibition of Arm-force, Navy forces and Air forces.
consequently
, they contribute millions of rupees to organizing the event one-day public special festival.
For example
, they invest in the custom of military dresses, their firearms and projectiles, missile orientation, medal sheets and other preparations in the capital city.
Thus
,
such
expenses would prompt a more economical crisis.
On the other hand
, there are various social issues
such
as literacy rate, inflation rate and health issues that are raising in the country, and impacting people
live’s
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live
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. Many people obstinate that
Government
must think to invest
money
in
these problem
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this problem
these problems
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which is essential for local people
instead
of squandering
money
on
such
celebrations. I support
this
assessment, lack of education and hospitals should be
under-consideration
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so
government
should not take debts from IMF to tackle these issues and
this
is creating more burden on the nation. In conclusion,
Government
ought to use their finances to improve the education and hospital systems in the country, which is necessary more than investing
government
money
in the national holiday celebrations.
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