Extreme sports that are dangerous like skiing and rock climbing should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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injured or even die by playing dangerous

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like skiing and mountain climbing yearly, which has brought up the argument indicating the prohibition of those

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the negative impacts of these

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on people and countries should not be underestimated, I am convinced that banning them is naive. Several destructive consequences have been argued against extreme

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obvious negative impact is the sadness that the death of a popular athlete can bring to a nation.

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can take the calamity of the death of a well-known sportsman, like Micheal Schumacher who died while skiing in Germany and left his countrymen in grief.

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, these

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have put a lot of burden on a country's health care systems. For treating the injured athletes and maintaining their

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, The government is spending phenomenal money every year.

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mentioned reasons make these types of

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not to be worth prevailing. Having that said, the advantages of these dangerous

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are many.

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of all, these

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are many people's hobbies and some of them are making a living from them. So, passing a law to prohibit them can lead to intruding

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of the most important human rights called freedom.

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, detering an individual from climbing, which makes him enjoy his life after a hard week, means them feeling

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in his mundane working life. Adding to

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industry is remunerative for many countries.

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, Swiss which boasts excellent snow-covered mountains for skiing

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been attracting enormous tourists and athletes annually.

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, banning

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sport directly can directly contribute to the country's industry downfall. To sum up, even though the perceived disadvantages of extreme

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are grave, I believe that it would be in the best interest of people and countries not to ban these

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, it would be prudent for governments to provide better supervision over these

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