In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
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countries have implemented a law, smoking is prohibited. Correct article usage
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For example
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India
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smokers
have affected 80% because of active smokers
. As a result
, governments have undertaken necessary steps to vanish this
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smokers
need to do their regular smoking habits from leaving their houses. Even though, I assume this
is not fair for mankind who surround with
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smokers
because they could not get healthy and fresh air. For instance
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smokers
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way
. However
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society.
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smoking
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and smoking
Consequently
, authorities have made strict rules and penalties which help to disappear this
critical problem. Wherever, human rights being
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