In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
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most
of
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countries have implemented a law, smoking is prohibited.
Moreover
, government authorities declare that smoking is illegal and
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the
way
to break human rights. Meanwhile, some other persons concur
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smokers
who leave
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houses
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continue to smoking habit is not illegal according to their perspective. Certainly, I do not agree with
this
statement and
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essay will focus on the drawbacks
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smoking habits and what are the positive impacts caused by
this
law
To begin
with, wherever democratic countries always try to implement rules and regulations for
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of the public. Of course, smoking is currently prohibited in public places
such
as parks cinemas bus
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and so on. When
,
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smokers
do smoking among
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, it would make inconvenience and uncomfortable for non-
smokers
. While,
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who have breathing problems, asthma and other diseases, they definitely affected by
this
toxic
odor
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.
For example
, In 2000,
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India
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survey shows passive
smokers
have affected 80% because of active
smokers
.
As a result
, governments have undertaken necessary steps to vanish
this
illegal behaviour from
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and particularly consider
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that human rights
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breakby
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this
detrimental act.
Furthermore
, some
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that
smokers
need to do their regular smoking habits from leaving their houses. Even though, I assume
this
is not fair for mankind who surround
with
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smokers
because they could not get healthy and fresh air.
For instance
,
as
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a responsible government can build places only for
smokers
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better
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way
.
However
, chain
smokers
always try to
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because they declare that it is a good
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way
and
also
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way
. Even though
smokers
should want to change
this
harmful activity because
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not only affect
for
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them but
also
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society. In conclusion, smoking is a deadly disease
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our globe. Admittedly, more and more nations follow the rules,
smoking
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is banned in public places.
Consequently
, authorities have made strict rules and penalties which help to disappear
this
critical problem. Wherever, human rights
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break
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, it would not make
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impression
among
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globe
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondhand smoke
  • respiratory problems
  • cardiovascular disease
  • clean air
  • public health
  • hospital admissions
  • economic benefits
  • smoking cessation
  • cultural shift
  • healthcare costs
  • smoke-free laws
  • enforcement
  • designated smoking areas
  • compliance
  • social attitudes
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