In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

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most

of

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countries have implemented a law, smoking is prohibited.

Moreover

, government authorities declare that smoking is illegal and

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the

way

to break human rights. Meanwhile, some other persons concur

the

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smokers

who leave

the

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houses

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as

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continue to smoking habit is not illegal according to their perspective. Certainly, I do not agree with

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statement and

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essay will focus on the drawbacks

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smoking habits and what are the positive impacts caused by

this

law

To begin

with, wherever democratic countries always try to implement rules and regulations for

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of the public. Of course, smoking is currently prohibited in public places

such

as parks cinemas bus

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and so on. When

,

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smokers

do smoking among

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, it would make inconvenience and uncomfortable for non-

smokers

. While,

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who have breathing problems, asthma and other diseases, they definitely affected by

this

toxic

odor

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.

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, In 2000,

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India

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survey shows passive

smokers

have affected 80% because of active

smokers

.

As a result

, governments have undertaken necessary steps to vanish

this

illegal behaviour from

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the community

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and particularly consider

with

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that human rights

also

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breakby

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break by

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this

detrimental act.

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, some

argues

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that

smokers

need to do their regular smoking habits from leaving their houses. Even though, I assume

this

is not fair for mankind who surround

with

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smokers

because they could not get healthy and fresh air.

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,

as

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a responsible government can build places only for

smokers

with

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better

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way

.

However

, chain

smokers

always try to

smoking

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because they declare that it is a good

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way

and

also

relaxation

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way

. Even though

smokers

should want to change

this

harmful activity because

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not only affect

for

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them but

also

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society. In conclusion, smoking is a deadly disease

in

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our globe. Admittedly, more and more nations follow the rules,

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is banned in public places.

Consequently

, authorities have made strict rules and penalties which help to disappear

this

critical problem. Wherever, human rights

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a break

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break

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, it would not make

good

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impression

among

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globe

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the globe

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.