You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: Say that you liked their photos of your family Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event Give them the details of the event.

Dear Rehan, I am writing

this

email to inform you that I was delighted to look at the photos taken by you at our daughter’s birthday party. I must say the photos were great with natural lighting and extraordinary effects.

Firstly

, I really loved the way you captured shots at the right moment in time which expresses natural emotions. I looked lifelike and all photos had an emotion which showed your creativity and imagination.

Furthermore

, we have a wedding event for my cousin that we are planning to celebrate next month, I would request you to be our professional photographer because you have unique artistic skills, and my cousin would definitely appreciate your work. The event is planned for the 25th of November at MGM Hall, located in Markham.

Finally

, I hope you will accept our request and make

this

event a memorable one. I look forward to hearing your response at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Jee

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coherence cohesion

While the logical flow of ideas is generally clear, strive to enhance transitions between paragraphs for smoother readability.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence and that supporting sentences are directly related to the main idea.

task achievement

The response to the task is mostly complete, but consider providing more details about the event such as the time and your expectations of the photographer's work.

task achievement

Maintain the current level of professionalism and clarity in the writing tone as it aligns well with the task requirements.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

158 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: Say that you liked their photos of your family Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event Give them the details of the event.

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