Some people believe that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motor bikes . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everywhere in
this
world, specific
traffic
rules and laws are important for the
safety
of the population . Most f
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people believe that getting
driving
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a driving
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license and
for
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more
safety
measures
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in roads
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, it is better to
incraese
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increase
the average legal
age
. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
view and in
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I try to point out
sorrounding
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surrounding
reasons with examples. There are
plethora
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of reasons in terms of advantages for
rising
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raising
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the legal
age
for
diving
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driving
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vehicles.
Firstly
,
inour
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in our
day to day life almost all individuals are using
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their own
vehicles for
travellingpurpose
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travelling purpose
travelling purposes
. So, the number of cars and motorbikes seen
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the roads
are
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very larger compared to the earlier time.
As a result
of
this
,
traffic
blocks are maximum
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not only in the city area but
also
in the rural.That means,
even
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school children and college students are used to
ride
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motorbikes rather than using college buses or
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public transportation.
This
leads to
increase
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an increase
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in the number of road accidents. To exemplify,as per the survey of
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kerala
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police department, the records
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that the number of
two wheeler
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accidents
are
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higher especially among students or youth compared to adults in 2021.
Secondly
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today's
todays
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generation
consider
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driving and
learn
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to drive
in
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avery
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a very
younger
age
is
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as
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a
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merit and
consider
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it
as
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a part of status.
Moreover
, many of the driving
schoolsm
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schools
school
are
supporrting
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supporting
the youngsters and old ages and take
this
as a chance to make
profit
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a profit
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on diving schools.
Finally
, most of the learners are using the highways and
traffic
areas without considering the rules and
drove
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rash and negligently without caring the public
safety
.
For instance
, according to the report of
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Transportation Authority of
kerala
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, it reveals that the
cases
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number of cases
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reporting
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against rash and negligent driving in 2020
is
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70% higher than in
2021
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the 2021
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survey. To conclude, it is better to
rise
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raise
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the legal
age
for driving ,
otherwise
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,otherwise
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the road accidents and
traffic
problems will double
in
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a greater level and it will be a
threaten
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to
the
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public
safety
.
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