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Soon it will be scientifically possible to clone humans. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the future, technologies will have the capacity of copying human images.
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 experiment will have some drawbacks compared to the benefits it can give. In
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 the disadvantages of cloning humans,
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 as the high cost it requires and the possibility of identity issues involved in illegal activities. At some point, there might be
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 an advantage for some
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 who wants to copy the physical features of their idolized artists. It is not impossible that sooner or later
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, it will definitely require a big amount of money. Only those who are big-time
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 can afford to undergo
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, the nose enhancement here in the Philippines is already expensive, what more if the whole facial feature will undergo major adjustments.
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, it can contribute to illegal activities by unknown illegal groups. Nowadays, given the
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 we have, most of our transactions online only require our facial features.
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, our mobile phones have
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 facial scanner which is
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 applied by some online applications, if
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 experiment will push through, it will be very easy to hack our information online
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 mobile banking and digital wallets. With these drawbacks, some might find it
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 advantageous for those who want to enhance their looks and copy some famous artists. Nowadays,
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 are more concerned with how they look, so
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 discovery will benefit those
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 who would like to change their faces. An example of
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 is those celebrities who often undergo plastic surgeries without considering their possible effects on their body later in life. In conclusion, the possibility of copying human images will only add up to some crimes and illegal activities in the future, aside from that, not everyone will be able to afford to clone.
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, it clearly outweighs the benefits of cloning.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cloning
  • Genetic engineering
  • Organ harvesting
  • Biotechnology
  • Ethical dilemma
  • Socio-economic divide
  • Eugenics
  • Autonomy
  • Identity crisis
  • Biodiversity
  • Gene therapy
  • Reproductive rights
  • Genetic diversity
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