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Many companies use advertisements to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make an advertisement effective? Is it a good thing or a bad thing for society.

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In recent times, commercial advertisement attracts common people and the companies are seeing a boost in their sales. In
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 essay, I will suggest a few reasons that production companies
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 various techniques to make the advertisements effective,
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 I think advertisement urge consumers to purchase unnecessary
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 and that have a negative effect on society.
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 with, the main reasons that make an advertisement popular by creating stunning visuals and actions performed by famous stars in their regions.
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 to that,
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 they
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 catchy pick-up lines for the product and repeat the
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 during IPL matches in order to seek public attraction.
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, during the summer ,season coca-cola beverage drink
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 will run on all channels in a repeat mode throughout the day because there is a huge demand in the market for cold drinks.
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, Companies had seen a drastic increase in their profit margin by boosting their
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 in newspapers and online sites by providing customers with various offers and discounts on the
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.
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 will persuade people's minds to buy more and more
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 which they do not
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 often.
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, people change their mobile phones more often which gives more features like astrophotography but they do not know how to
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 them properly. as per my knowledge
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 are used for marketing a useless product to lure consumers. To Conclude, profit is the key and ultimate goal of every advertising company uses many techniques and strategies to attract the public to buy its
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 which benefit businesses not the individuals and
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 will have a negative effect on society.
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