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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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driverless
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cars, buses and trucks. In my
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 I partly agree with
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 has more
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, and my reasons will be outlined below. On the one hand, it is admitted some clear benefits. The primary merit of
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 is that could help
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 have more
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 read some
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driverless
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technology
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car
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 and the owner even can sleep when their vital assistant can help them drive the
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. Another advantage is that
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car
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 always
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the
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traffic
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, while we drive the traditional cars, we often do not pay attention
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 our speed;
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, we
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 fast and break the law but with
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, we can make sure that always obey the
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 law.
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, there still exist some drawbacks of
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vehical
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vehicle
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this
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 could be
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disadvantage
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 because
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not
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 really trust it. To clarify,
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technology
 can got problems
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 like
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traffic
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 congestion.
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 can not move and we need to
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 on their own.
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, not everyone can buy a
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 with
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. To explain,
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 is a new modern and it has a high level of price. If
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 do not do anything to control the price, poor
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not buy
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car
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. In conclusion, while
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 appears to be beneficial for some reasons, including
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people
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 have more time to relax, I still believe that the negative impact it may expert
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 considerable,
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 as not everyone can buy
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car
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 because it is too expensive.
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 of driveless cannot be supported. If government reduce
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 on
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vehical
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vehicle
, it will more popular
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 citizens.
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