Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, individuals or government? Give resones for your answer and unclude any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experiance.

Today, more

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medical experiments are sponsored by

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non public

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firms. Whereas

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the companies run by the government will bring security to

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greater

extend

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and

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, I believe,

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will be beneficial for the nation as some of the private findings can be kept away from misuse.

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essay elaborates how

state run

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organisations, are safe for new study than the private firms and Individuals.

Firstly

, the multinational agencies have experts with discerning views on

medicals

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,

however

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they perform research in one place and sell those drugs in the other countries. Perhaps, the bodies like

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are only looking for

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profit. The major loss with

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association,

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- they send out all the profit to the

country

of the original, and though they manufacture drugs in

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country

like India, they always have

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prefrance

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preference

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to the nationals of their head office location.

Furthermore

, If we consider an individual doing medical

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, primarily he may not have enough money to handle the operations, and more on that, the testing of those samples will be hard

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because arrangements of trials will be costly for them.

However

, the exploration done by the officials inside their own

country

can create opportunities for their people.

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, as the government keeps confidential information safe in the

country

, it will not use it for any wrong purpose.

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, most of the microbiological research ISRO is conducting bring fantastic results, and that will eventually alter our life. Here, I

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have the strong opinion that

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legal authorities can do

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medical exploration better as they have finance as well as state of the art new technological centres. In conclusion, when it comes to making a fortune, corporations can not be trusted particularly for research.

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is incapable of making

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work considering the causes mentioned above. Only the government can be trusted with all possible

experimentations

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