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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir, I am a regular reader of your magazine and I would like to draw your attention to a recently published article
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in the March 2022 edition claiming that traditional
jewellary
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jewellery
 store is not available in Mohali. I am afraid that
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in
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 incorrect. As of
now
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Moahli
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Mohali
have
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 one of the best stores in
tricity
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 area which includes
jewellary
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jewellery
 store
also
. Your magazine is considered one of the best reliable
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 of
informatio
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. Many people like me who want to travel after reading your magazine trust details provided with closed eyes and do plan as written. So,
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 really crucial to make sure that
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 published in your articles
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 been given
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 care. If I may suggest some corrective actions for the same, please write a new article just about famous
jewellary
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jewellery
 stores in
tricity
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 area and include the Jindua store in Mohali. In which the Bridal and traditional
jewellary
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jewellery
 is available on rent
also
.
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, corrected information should be published in your
next
 month's edition along with apology remarks. yours faithfully, Inderjeet Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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