Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Education for
universities
always developing and changing for
students
to study easily without worrying about anything and nowadays they offer online classes for the one who cannot attend regularly because of difficult transportation or far distances. And I believe that
this
trend has so many benefits for everyone with current situations.
Although
online classrooms are already available in some
universities
since the covid-19 pandemics has happened, after that, almost every
universities
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in the world have online courses now. By teaching
from
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online,
students
does
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not need to care for physical
contacts
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and focus only on studying and even
they
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are sick or ill they no longer need to be restrained by
fearing
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of infecting other people.
Moreover
, they will have more free time as there is no more transportation to get to the destination place because we can learn from the home with comfort.
Also
,
students
can now study
from
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any
universities
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from anywhere in the world despite their home countries. There are still left advantages
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this
phenomenon
beside
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aforementioned
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the aforementioned
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ones.
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, because
of
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the fees for online learning are always cheaper than learning on campus, people with tighter finance can now afford
for
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their
desire
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subjects.
However
, whether many
of
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positive facts
are existed
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,
few
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drawbacks of
this
phenomenon
also
need to be considered. The most crucial thing is that there will be
less
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practical practices for
students
compared to the campus and it is not possible for them to learn and practice
in
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practical subjects
from
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online.
Lastly
, there are still people who prefer more campus than online for the reasons which they think they feel unsatisfied and not effective learning
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online. Overall, it can
said
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that even though
some
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few disadvantages
are existed
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, its positive developments are outweighing them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • accessibility
  • tuition fees
  • commuting
  • accommodation
  • multimedia
  • interactive tools
  • enhance
  • cater to
  • face-to-face interaction
  • personalized attention
  • complex concepts
  • motivation
  • discipline
  • structure
  • extracurricular activities
  • networking
  • university experience
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