Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from and more children will study from home as computer technology become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?
Due to advanced
technology
, doing work
or studying using computer
technology
become easy than a few decades ago. Here, people
will be able to do any office work
and students of college or schools can study from home because of innovation in computer
technology
. However
, it has both the negative and positive views of it that should be discussed in the below paragraphs.
There are numerous positive views of computer
technology
one of those is employees can do work
fast than they do physical work
at the workplace. For example
, in many industries workers are doing work
from home such
as designing, making orders of the products and some technical work
. In addition
, they will get flexible time to do a particular task which is given by the manager. Apart from this
, the environment get benefits, as such
, if employees or employers works from home then
the traffic of vehicles would decrease as a result
, people
will get pure air and also
we can save natural source like fuel. This
computer
technology
must help the children when they use it at school and college. Moreover
, we see nowadays, almost every education centre has instaled computers and they have already added the one computer
subject as a compulsory.
The negative impacts cannot be underestimated. Firstly
, compared to the past, propel had good physical strength and they could do any work
by hour but in the current situation about more than half of people
have some problem due to they always connect with a computer
screen or any other devices. Therefore
, they face problems such
as some having eyesight issues,and a few having weak bone problems. Secondly
, nowadays propel become lazy after working shifts, they do not do any physical exercise for being strong. The technology
will impact children's studies, students cannot learn the practical skill of technical subjects which is more important when they want to take part in a technical company.
To conclude, computer
technology
has little wide advantages than disadvantages but the impacts of it us very harmful for both people
and students. I would suggest that we would use it much less and I need to do more physical work
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