Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from and more children will study from home as computer technology become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

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Due to advanced
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, doing
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or studying using
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technology
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become easy than a few decades ago. Here,
people
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will be able to do any office
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and students of college or schools can study from home because of innovation in
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technology
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, it has both the negative and positive views of it that should be discussed in the below paragraphs. There are numerous positive views of
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technology
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one of those is employees can do
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fast than they do physical
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at the workplace.
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, in many industries workers are doing
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from home
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as designing, making orders of the products and some technical
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, they will get flexible time to do a particular task which is given by the manager. Apart from
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, the environment get benefits, as
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, if employees or employers works from home
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the traffic of vehicles would decrease
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,
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will get pure air and
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we can save natural source like fuel.
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must help the children when they use it at school and college.
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, we see nowadays, almost every education centre has instaled computers and they have already added the one
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subject as a compulsory. The negative impacts cannot be underestimated.
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, compared to the past, propel had good physical strength and they could do any
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by hour but in the current situation about more than half of
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have some problem due to they always connect with a
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screen or any other devices.
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, they face problems
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as some having eyesight issues,and a few having weak bone problems.
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, nowadays propel become lazy after working shifts, they do not do any physical exercise for being strong. The
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will impact children's studies, students cannot learn the practical skill of technical subjects which is more important when they want to take part in a technical company. To conclude,
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technology
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has little wide advantages than disadvantages but the impacts of it us very harmful for both
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and students. I would suggest that we would use it much less and I need to do more physical
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  • carbon footprint
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