Some people believe that engaging in an active pastime does more to develop childrens’ life skills than time spent reading. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the past decades, the world has evolved in terms of parenting and education. Nowadays, parents

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to start their

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in order to follow up

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world's

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and hectic culture. Some people argue that giving more

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for the

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's childhood amusements,

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as playing with their peers, will have more advantages than reading their preschool lectures. I completely agree with

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opinion, even though some people might have different aspects.

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essay will seek to examine the complex issue. On the one hand, I would like to point out that there are various reasons to consider getting advantages of engaging

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physical activities

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kids' younger age. On top of everything, physical development plays

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pivotal role in a child's life. By giving them enough

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of playing, their body and metabolism will become robust and powerful.

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,

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of reading

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lessons, they should be taught the definition of good personalities and behaviours. Particularly, by letting them

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participate more in pastimes, they can learn not only to cope the peer pressure but

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communication skill with other kids.

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, I would like to express an equal view that there are several drawbacks to

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issue.

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, the

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could struggle to survive in

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crucial world if they did not finish

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school in

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is one of the main reasons

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their parent's

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.

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, despite the fact that

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physical contact is essential, most people have a tendency of finishing their kids' educational years in advance in order to pursue better careers and opportunities. By doing

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, they trust their

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can achieve a successful life in

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long run. In conclusion,

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we have some disadvantages and weaknesses, I passionately believe that letting a

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gap for the

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's physical and

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development before entering their prolonged academic life is the most critical part

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their long term success.