Some people believe that unpaid community service some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are some people that argue that some
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social services could be mandatory high school
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. In my point of view, these actions improve the environmental conscientization and reduce cleaning
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costs. When it comes to ecological thinking or developing a social conscientisation, cleaning and socialising
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are
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beneficial
for in-developing individuals.
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of our social adaptation to the big urban cores, the population tend to play a less active part in the ecologic activity. Because of
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, forcing youngsters to clean and do exercises related to
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our environment,
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as cleaning their playground, can be very educative and,
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, reinforce a basic social respectful idea of
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clean public places.
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, in Japan, there are not many waste beans placed in its streets, even so, Japan is considered
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one of the
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countries, inculcating
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eco-friendly thinking since their childhood. Another factor to take
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consideration is the reduction of monetary costs for cleaning and social
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related to children,
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would be reduced if high schoolers take part
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it. These
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that can be done by young people can decrease the urban waste workers' work.
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,
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exercises
related to team sports and social life for mid scholars can be supervised by high
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scholars
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,
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activitisactivitis may be fulfilled by these students, conomisating the overall costs.
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, in Japan, people in schools practice
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in
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, requiring
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a teacher to
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because the
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senior
students take care of these
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, all in all, active social experiences are necessary to
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develop
a more social awareness mentality and,
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, reduce the average
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • neighborhood improvement
  • teaching sports
  • empathy
  • social justice
  • transferable skills
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • problem-solving
  • civic duty
  • civic engagement
  • educational enhancement
  • practical experiences
  • academic learning
  • real-world applications
  • social cohesion
  • mutual support
  • time management
  • balancing priorities
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