Some people believe that a significant difference between a parent’s age and their child's age is a good thing. Do you think the advantages of a significant age gap outweigh the disadvantages?
The difference between a parent’s
age
and their child
's age
is talked up by some as a very good thing. Recent research suggests that focusing on growing up to
a Change preposition
as
child
can be significant for kids. Although
the gap of age
is not important, mature parents
could explain their experiences more easily rather than young parents
. On the other ,hand young parents
can understand more easily what children think compared to old parents
. Actually, I think there are both advantages and drawbacks to grow
up their Change the verb form
growing
child
. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding. 96
To begin
with, many individuals can not be(be yok) make a child
(offspring, youngster) in the fastly improving globe. Because livelihood(geçim kaynağı) anxiety increase(s) day by day in the current world. Therefore
, people who want a kid have to delay. For instance
, my cousin who is thirty years old want to make a child
but he said if I have a kid, I will not buy diaper or baby food. This
statement is caused (by) (an) increasing a
(a yok) significant difference between a parent's Change the article
an
age
(life, youth) and their child
's age
. I think the advantage of being a late parent is to present children (with) a good future.
On the other hand
, a person who has a child
at an early age
can be happy for(with) growing up with and they probably see their children more than old parents
because (the) avarege
(average) life process is the same (for) everybody. Correct your spelling
average
In addition
, even if kids do mistake the young parents
can explain the truth which can understand easily. For example
, I have old parents
and they do not know (the) current trend(s) on the internet so they do not understand what I say.
To sum up, the difference between a child
and parents
may look like(like yok) a good but actually
It has both disadvantages and advantages. 287Add a comma
,actually
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