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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation, Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

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Over the past decades, the world has evolved substantially in terms of transportation. Using individual
car
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 become
predominante
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predominant
predominance
 among
people
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 compared to using other kinds of transportation. There are various forces that drive
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 trend, and several
solutions
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 should be adopted to solve the thorny issues that have
been
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arisen.
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 with, due to the ease of transportation,
people
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 nowadays tend to use their private
cars
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 even for a normal walking distance.
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, the lack of exercise and daily basis movements
lead
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 them to a sedentary lifestyle and more diseases,
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 as heart attack and obesity.
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, the individual relying on their personal
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 causes the raise
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 fuel
consumptions
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consumption
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, and the increased number of
cars
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 on roads make more traffic jams and air pollution. As a consequence, today's world is confronting temperature changes because of
people
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's egotistic personal usages. There are several
solutions
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 that should be taken into consideration to tackle these issues.
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, the government should provoke and encourage
people
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 to use more public transport. By doing
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, a governing body can get not only the funds from citizens but
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 can reduce the
numbers
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 of
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vehicle
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vehicles
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 on road.
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, the land authorities can control the numerical data of traffic by raising the cost.
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, In Singapore, one of the most developed countries in the world, the government used to control the quantities of road users by increasing the price of fuel and taxes on buying
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.
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, the land officials can announce strict laws, like the maximum
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cars
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 per one family rule. To summarize, the above-mentioned problems could be solved by the given
solutions
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, and if the proposed alternative
solutions
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 were to be implemented, the potential issues could be reduced to some extent, even if not totally eliminated.
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