Some people say that music is a good way of bringing different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Listening
song
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is the best boulevard to fetch some new things in various custody and ages in a pile. From my perspective,
this
proposition is completely true. It seems undeniable that without enjoying singing life is dull and gloomy. Human life is full of amusement. As a consequence,
people
prefer
song
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very much. They are very fond of grabbing any musical lyrics. They are habituated with
this
.
Thus
, melody can gather different ages of men and women from different places and it assists them a lot to enjoy something special.
However
, some public supposes that only listening
songs
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does not give any entertainment to
persons
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. There must be other cultural issues which can
also
spread in
human
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brain.
For instance
, men and women are now enjoying rock and jazz bands and they can meet themselves easily in an individual place where they can know each other.
On the contrary
,
people
also
meet in a seminar where there are no tune issues.
Moreover
, modern life is so
confused
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.
People
cannot get enough time to meet themselves where it is very needed to create a conversation.
As a result
, listening to music can widen their knowledge. They can make a festival while they know that listening to
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the song
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song
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is a significant aspect. In
this
way,
people
are now very advanced about these issues. They are now refreshing their minds where it is not possible without any
song
. To contact outside the country humans are now very conscious to
listen
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any tune.
Nevertheless
, some individuals
thinks
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that there is no need to arrange any musical instruments where there are adequate options to create a presentation, cultural ceremony etcetera.
For example
, folk can now enjoy classical opera and their knowledge is scattered every day.
On the contrary
, humans attending
in
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a seminar can form their knowledge and create
a
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diversity. In conclusion, the listening
song
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can create a group
of
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community.
However
,
crowd
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the crowd
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also
create a team to fashion any meeting. I am in my opinion, there is no alternative way without enjoying listening to music.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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